Board Thread:Beginning Singers/@comment-28181360-20170131020758/@comment-31755742-20170417174114

Hey Hey Hey~

So I've just checked out both your videos, and please believe me when I say this feedback is only to help you improve, not put you down. Also, I'm pretty much a newbie (I've actually been singing covers for ages but only just recently started uploading) so you can even ignore what I have to say.

From what I can tell your timing and rhythm has gotten ever so slightly better, it's still quite a way off though. Also, it sound like you're forcing yourself to match the beat of the song, maybe you should cover something a bit slower? I like your lyrics though, they're good. How long do you spend practicing your covers? I feel like if you listened to the song more, and try singing it with the original vocals, you can improve your beat and rhythm. Your vocals are also good, but again, they can improve too, make them softer (for the right song of course).

But just to answer your question, yes, you have improved :) And I'm sure you can keep improving x

Hope I don't sound too harsh (remember I'm a newbie, so my word may not mean anything at all XD). Either way, hope I helped ^^

P.S. I would also be eternally grateful if you could give some criticism on my cover :

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=1R1ksPf2Uxw